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The art of the novel

16 Friday Sep 2011

Posted by Keith Muchowski in Baseball, Writing

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The smaller the ball the better the writing.  That is the adage when it comes to sports writing.

No sport lends itself to the world of letters more than our National Pastime.  It has always seemed to me, though, that baseball fiction has always lagged behind non-fiction.  Jim Bouton’s Ball Four is Exhibit A.  I think the reason is the dichotomy of the fan base. There is of course some overlap between the groups, but in general fans of the game can be divided into realists and romantics. There has always been a tension between the Bull Durham crowd and the Field of Dreams crowd.  (For the record, I am a member of the former.) Too often novelists have tried to appeal to one group or the other–to the detriment of the story they are trying to tell.  When you throw on top of that the often reactionary elements who run the game and control a great deal of its institutional memory, it is not a good prescription for the creation of fine art.  Mike Doherty of Salon mounts a defense.

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Checking in

14 Wednesday Sep 2011

Posted by Keith Muchowski in Writing

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Hey everybody, I am sorry about the lack of posts these past few days but I have been working hard on my encyclopedia article.  Last night I wrote about four hundred words.  Tonight I am going to finish the draft before heading off to the Apple store for a One to One session on my Mac Air.  Tomorrow I will put the final touches on the piece and then send off to the editor Friday.  Encyclopedia articles are interesting because every word must count within the tight framework of the assignment.  The Hayfoot noticed something awhile back that I never realized: I always listen to reggae when I write.  Last night it was Black Uhuru’s Red and several cds of the greatest reggae group of them all, Culture.  I think the reason I listen to reggae while writing is because it talks about contemporary problems whose roots lie in historical events.

It is literally a plague on our society

27 Wednesday Jul 2011

Posted by Keith Muchowski in Writing

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I thought I was the only one who noticed the increasing use of the word literally in the figurative sense.  All perpetrators should literally be drawn and quartered.

“A Soft Place to Sleep”

15 Wednesday Jun 2011

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That night, when the fighting was over, Jacksland spread his bedroll upon the soft grass on that high spot overlooking the river. Union ironclads, moored just offshore, resembled squat drum cans set atop big sheets of metal under the stars. The masts of man-of-wars looked like tall trees. The men around Jacksland felt the expectation and terror of the day wear away into a bone tiredness from which Lance felt impossible to awake. He thought about his wife and daughter in New York. He thought about milking cows in a cold barn, the plume of his breath, the smell of manure and dry hay, remembered the deep white snow spread across rolling fields in January and the way the north winds swept down from Canada to pile high drifts along the glacier-stone-fence-rows. Lance remembered the way the Hudson River always froze solid this time of year.

The Historical Society of the Lower Cape Fear, in cooperation with alternative publication encore, holds an annual short fiction contest.  L.E. (Roy) Dieffenbach is the 2011 winner.

The stillness of William Zinsser

09 Saturday Apr 2011

Posted by Keith Muchowski in Writing

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Over the past few weeks one of my weekly rituals has become checking the American Scholar blog every Friday to read the latest installment from William Zinsser.  Born in 1922, Zinsser is a lifelong New Yorker who began writing for the Herald Tribune after a stint in the Army during World War II.  He went on to freelance for most of the leading magazines of the mid-twentieth century, teach at Yale, edit the Book-of-the-Month Club, and publish eighteen books of his own.  Now, approaching his ninetieth year, he has thankfully taken to the blogosphere with “Zinsser on Friday.” And oh yes, he moonlights playing a little jazz piano in the local clubs as well.  For over half a century he has shared his mantra with students, fellow journalists, and the public-at-large: simplify your language and thereby find your humanity.  Recently he turned his attention to Appomattox, the 146th anniversary of which is today.

On writing Ellis Island well

14 Monday Mar 2011

Posted by Keith Muchowski in Ellis Island, Writing

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For several years in the mid-2000s I collaborated with two teachers and a librarian on a writing and research module at a local high school.  The four of us taught the basics of scholarship to a group of Advanced Placement English and History juniors.  The final assignment was a five-six page paper.  I continually stressed the importance of writing clearly and concisely.  We kicked things off each term with a reading and discussion of George Orwell’s “Politics and the English Language.” One school year, when the budget permitted, we distributed copies of Strunk and White’s The Elements of Style to each student that were theirs to keep.  Most students eventually “got it,” but I was always struck by how tenaciously some clung to the belief that pretentious, ornate prose was the way to the teacher’s heart and a good grade.  In his most recent “Zinsser on Friday” posting, the incomparable William Zinsser recounts a challenge once posed to him by an editor: submit a travel piece not to exceed 300 words.  Not wanting to stray too far from home, he selected a certain island “a mere subway and ferry ride away.”  Read the results.

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